Hot kisses on my neck
Sending tingles down my spine
A husky lustful voice
Telling me I’m divine
My breathing is shallow
My lust is ignited
The dirty look in your eye
Has got me excited
Teasing me, exciting me
Your tongue starts to explore
Touching my inner places
Until I’m begging you for more
You feel my excitement
With every deeper thrust
My body starts trembling
Deep moans filled with lust
The animal deep within me
Clawing at your back
Biting on your neck
A sexually charged attack
The release hits me hard
And I'm filled with your desire
Screaming your name
This passion takes me higher
In a list
A contest entry
- Erotic Sexual Desire by CassidyEngle.
508 points, ended November 23, 2007, 6 entries
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Comments
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Hardcore Holder
This was nice, erotic. Could have been more deatailed but thats ok. Thanks for entering -
Hott
Very nice visuals I must say! Hells ya!


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Intense write
Wow this was written with great description good work -
I could start off on a ramble about your lovely use of rhyme and all that english grammer crap, or I could just put it simple, this is amazing. I havn't been able to read a lot on this site recently, but this is a wonderful thing to come back to, I love the emotion behind it, and how powerful each line felt


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This is wonderful! I really enjoyed reading it, I like it when it sends the mind into other world of love and passion so simply, well done.

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Brava!
An erotic poems that rhymes to me, is actually very rare to find
I love it!
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