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Hot passion

Hot kisses on my neck
Sending tingles down my spine
A husky lustful voice
Telling me I’m divine

My breathing is shallow
My lust is ignited
The dirty look in your eye
Has got me excited

Teasing me, exciting me
Your tongue starts to explore
Touching my inner places
Until I’m begging you for more

You feel my excitement
With every deeper thrust
My body starts trembling
Deep moans filled with lust

The animal deep within me
Clawing at your back
Biting on your neck
A sexually charged attack

The release hits me hard
And I'm filled with your desire
Screaming your name
This passion takes me higher

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  • Nicotine Eyes
    December 13, 2007
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    Hardcore Holder

    This was nice, erotic. Could have been more deatailed but thats ok. Thanks for entering


  • Prison of Lyme
    November 29, 2007
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    Hott

    Very nice visuals I must say! Hells ya!


  • storiesuntold gold member
    November 27, 2007
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    Intense write

    Wow this was written with great description good work

  • ScarletDreams
    November 19, 2007
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    I could start off on a ramble about your lovely use of rhyme and all that english grammer crap, or I could just put it simple, this is amazing. I havn't been able to read a lot on this site recently, but this is a wonderful thing to come back to, I love the emotion behind it, and how powerful each line felt


  • Myjoy gold member
    November 14, 2007

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    This is wonderful! I really enjoyed reading it, I like it when it sends the mind into other world of love and passion so simply, well done.


  • CassidyEngle
    November 14, 2007
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    Brava!
    An erotic poems that rhymes to me, is actually very rare to find
    I love it!

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