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Everything


While you sleep wrapped in the afterglow of passion
I slip away to inhale the silence of a new day,
watching the flow of the current in the early morning quiet


the warmth of your kiss still lingers on my lips,
thinking of your gentle touch as it trailed fire across my skin

I feel my spirit drawn back steadily to you

the things you do and say to make me feel beautiful
have awakened me to the joy of being a woman,
feelings missing from my life until you wandered in

from our first night, as we talked until the sun rose above the hills
you were so patient, gently coaxing me to share my dreams
breaking down the walls built by years of loneliness and mistrust

the nights we've spent wrapped in each other's arms
as you gently teased away my shyness, desire blossomed deep within
tending to my needs, igniting a flame you so eagerly fanned

you can carry me to heaven with a touch, as
the power of your love weaves a web of magic to surround us
for the first time in my life I feel secure

when I look into your eyes I see forever waiting there
you have become my future, my past, my present
you are my everything...

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • movedon
    February 5, 2008
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    wowza! very nice write here! i love it


  • Airborne Ed silver member
    December 19, 2007

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    Congrats on the honourable mention. It realy is a beautiful poem. Filled with such passiona dn so much tenderness. It just has a very special feel to it and the picture is just breath taking. I think it is a masterpiece..


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    December 19, 2007

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    You got your poem in before I discovered that in editing time of contest that I forgot to make sure that no prewrite showed up. While this is a lovely poem, if you knew me, you would know I love fresh new ways at looking at things...and have only in error allowed old writes to enter.

    This poems shows you have talent..oh, how I wish you had written something new by digging deeper into the subject and writing from the far edge.


  • poet2angels gold member
    November 18, 2007
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    beautifully written ...touching and romantic

    Lynda


  • Angelic Princess21
    November 17, 2007
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    very nice poem. great write. thank you for entering and best of luck :

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