Have you ever live, escaping of nothing,
When none looking for thing,
go through hell in smokes
Maintaining out flame.
Like a lost cause,
early sang victory;
approaches doing history
fast forgotten,
remembers past counts,
intends to put them right soon,
speech,does not dare.
Why adds settled counts up?
Author notes
spiritualangel
Prompt:Start with the words "Have you ever"
Keep it under fifty (50) words
and end in a question mark.
check spelling
A contest entry
- Have you ever...? by Exodus.
2550 points, ended November 27, 2007, 38 entries
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This was an interesting way of using the form, it's a very full poem, if that makes sense. Thank you
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