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Sir Phillip Sydney


That poetic old fella, Sir Sydney,
Had a strangely balloon-shaped left kidney.
He strutted about
With this lump sticking out ~
Well, he made 'em all look at him, didn't he?


Author notes

English. Born: 1554, Died: 1586, 68 poems.
Sir Philip Sidney (November 30, 1554 – October 17, 1586) became one of the Elizabethan Age's most prominent figures.

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  • Old Poetry gold member
    November 27, 2007

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    Thanks for your entry in the competition. Alas unsuccesful this time but "we" will be running others and would love to see more entries from your pen.
    OP

  • montez gold member
    November 23, 2007
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    Excellent

    Unusual and innovative.
    This would be my choice 4 gold (so far).
    Regards,
    Robin.

  • Seeking Peace silver member
    November 14, 2007

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    Hhehe you know how much I love the limerick side of you hun, this made acutally cackle... heheh well done and goodluck in this contest hun

    Karen


  • I-Like-Rhymes gold member
    November 13, 2007

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    http://oldpoetry.com/oauthor/show/Sir_Philip_Sidney
    Sidney was indeed a fine poet and a fine patron of poets. Thanks for including him on the competition.
    Jim


  • lexy23
    November 13, 2007
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    lol, that was lovely, nice little smile on my face for the4 day x


  • rufina caraid gold member
    November 13, 2007
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    Sir Sidney said. ‘Look at my bump’
    It’s my kidney sir, no not a hump,
    And when I am able
    I’ll jump on the table
    And hopefully land with a thump!


    Loved your Limerick, please excuse my return in Limerick form, sometimes I can’t help myself. Thanks for your entry.   Von


  • annamoy
    November 13, 2007

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    Very amusing limerick you've penned. I do vaguely remember this figure from my history lessons! Good luck in the contest.

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