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Darkness

I lay fallen
Darkness surrounds me
Clinging to nature
The only light I see

Shadows closing in
The time is near
To embrace the darkness
And live my fear

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  • grannyeri gold member
    November 22, 2007

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    IF one is into dark poetry and is in a bit of a rut, think this would get their muse going. Liked the flow and the rhythm and rhyme of this short poem.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 14, 2007

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    Great rhyme and flow, very creative and moving. Thanks for sharing this... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.