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That is love

We walk together
In peaceful silence
No need to talk
Just enjoying the moment

Under the stars
We enjoy the night
No fears
No fright

Love keeps us protected
In a sweet cocoon
As we sit together
Under the silvery moon

You are my life and soul
My love so true
I have your heart
Because i love you

In peace love is sweet
And sweet as a dove
In trouble it's strong
But,of course, that is love

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  • The Madman silver member
    November 30, 2007

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    What a soft, precious, sensual, and romantic write and so sweet also. Wonderfully penned from a true romantic,

    Evan


  • stavykm gold member
    November 30, 2007

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    I Love This Poem

    Excellent write. I feel this way with my husband. What a beautiful write of true love and everlasting love. Thank you for your gift of words into poetry.
    Blessings
    Kelle Marie, stavykm


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    November 29, 2007

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    I love this piece! Well done and thanks
    a lot for sharing it here! Keep up the
    great work!




    Jeremy0826


  • Entwining Beauty
    November 29, 2007

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    oh wow as in sweet cocoon we sit together how beautiful is that line alone wonderful poem very beautiful


  • PureRomance
    November 29, 2007
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    I loved this poem so much I just had to comment on it again God bless you in all you and good luck in the contests this is in

  • Entwining Beauty
    November 25, 2007
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    amazingly written good luck


  • PureRomance
    November 19, 2007

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    This is a very beautiful poem. You did an excellent job with this. I look forward to reading more from you as my time allows me too. God bless you in all that you do and write and good luck to you and your poem in this contest.

  • Entwining Beauty
    November 16, 2007
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    Do not reveal yourself please

    very beautiful good luck


  • CherryOnTop
    November 16, 2007
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    This is beautiful.Lovely and romantic.


  • DeeplyFallen2010
    November 13, 2007
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    very nice... being in love is the greatest feeling in the world.


  • Fulabeans
    November 13, 2007
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    wow nice it really captures the essence of love

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