Have you ever wiped a tear
From a baby's eye
Have you ever held a baby
To comfort it when it cries
Have you ever rocked a baby
And sang it back to sleep
These are precious memories
That one likes to keep
I have, have you?
Author notes
honest opinion
A contest entry
- Have you ever...? by Exodus.
2550 points, ended November 27, 2007, 38 entries
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Comments
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The only thing I would suggest is to add a little bit of punctuation, but nothing major. Other than that I thought this was a sweet and light piece. It's always good to remember the little things like this
Thank you
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