Is it right to secretly want
To have hidden desires
That would shock and desgust
Horror and mystify
I don't know that anyone understands
But that doesn't matter
Or does it...
Do my deepest thoughts affect anyone
Anyone at all
If they do
Will I care
Will my dreams be dismissed
By the very essance of my being
I can't say one way or the other
If I had the choice of my dream, my life
And the friends that I hold so dear to me
Which would I choose
What path will I take
Will I do right, or make a mistake?
A contest entry
- Anything and everything! by My Selfish Romance.
300 points, ended January 26, 2008, 97 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Just let me know if you understand what I'm going through
Comments
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This is good... I think that you could make it better, I don't know how, but this just isn't one of your strong pieces I guess, I have read every single one of your poems that I could get my hands on you know that. I think this is good but you definately have done better. This is still better than a lot of the other poems that I see on this site. This poem doesn't really sound like your heart was in it like everything else I've read of your hunny, cummon you can do it, find your heart I know it's in there somewhere, sometime you will find it. I know you will. You have made some bad choices, but I know that you will get straightened out again... You should at least after all... you are a daddy right... Sorry about that but hey, you know that no matter what you're gonna be attatched and you should try to be a good role model, I just hope that you get out of this shlump you have been in.
~Alix
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