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The woods

    After locking the store’s door, I joined Debbie and Edith by their car. Living near the store, I usually walked to work so had to join them in their car for the drive to their place. Once in the car, I settled down in the back seat next to Edith. As Debbie drove off the lot, Edith began to massage my breasts, running one hand over the thin fabric while her other hand moved lower to play over my thighs before inching up to my crotch where the fabric of my shorts were soaked through, giving proof to my eagerness for this night to continue.
    Our fondling continued for a few minutes with Edith darting glances in the back mirror at us before she asked Debbie if she felt like a side trip. Not sure what they were talking about but knowing that it could only mean fun and pleasure, I didn’t say a word as Debbie nodded her head in ascent while keeping her fingers busy rubbing between my spread legs.
    Debbie laughed at the confusion on my face when Edith pulled up in the parking lot of the local Wal-Marts. “Don’t worry hun, don’t you know that this store is great for toys?” she whispered in my ear.
    Getting out of the car I followed them into the store. At this late hour there were few shoppers about. Debbie and Edith knew what they wanted and so no time was wasted as they led the way to the produce department. There, they selected just the right sized cucumber and then picked out the largest plantain that they could find. Holding on to their treasure, we next went to household where a bag of laundry pins were found and held up by Edith with glee. Debbie quickly found laundry line to add to their collection of toys. By the time we reached the checkout line, ping pong paddles and a couple of scarves were added to our cart. Even though unsure what would be happening next, I joined in with their laughter and knowing glances as we were rung up.
    Once back in the car with Debbie taking the wheel, Edith and I shared a few passionate kisses, with our hands groping and exploring each other through our clothes.  I barely noticed our surrounding when Debbie pulled the car over and shut off the engine. It was only when Debbie spoke that Edith and I pulled our lips apart to look around.
    “What are we doing here?” I couldn’t keep the surprise out of my voice as I noticed for the first time that we were at the edge of the woods.
    Grinning, Debbie got out of the car and held the passenger door opened for me. “We live too far out of town so I thought we could make a quick stop for some fun before going home. Come on, you will enjoy this.”
    Hesitantly I pulled myself out of the car and silently followed them deep into the covering of trees. Feeling apprehensive now, I wasn’t sure if I wanted to run and find my way back to town on my own or to trust them and put myself completely into their hands. Edith had the bag from Wal-Marts with her and while seemingly innocent at the time of purchase, the idea that they now had rope to bind me with and leave me here alone played through my mind.
    Coming to a rest at a tall tree, Edith shook out her hair as she placed the bag down on the ground. Debbie came to me and took me in her arms, placing her lips over my in a deep lingering kiss that erased any fears from my being. I felt Edith as she moved behind me, sliding her hands in between my and Debbie’s form, grabbing hold of my breasts as she began kissing and nibbling on the back of my neck. The tension of the last few minutes left my body as I felt Edith’s hands descent down our bodies so that she was soon at our pelvis level. Using one hand on my mound and the other on Debbie’s, Edith began to grind her pelvic into my ass, moaning softly in my ears as she did so. Straining not to break my and Debbie’s kiss, I reached behind me, trying to find Edith’s pleasure as my body responded fully to her administration.
    Pulling away from me, Debbie went to the bag while informing us that it was now time for some real fun. Returning to us, she began removing the items while Edith pulled on the bottom of my shirt, exposing my breasts to the cool night air as she tugged it up over my head. I stood still and raised my arms above my head as the shirt came off, lifting my breasts higher with my reach, the air dancing over my nipples, bringing them to erection before my new found friend’s eyes.
    Sucking in my breath, I stood still when Edith came around me and undid my shorts, lowering them down to the ground, which I then stepped out of. The air washing over my body, caressing my sensitive skin, making me hunger more for their touch, I watched Debbie who had opened the packages by this time and was moving slowly towards me, staring at my body with eyes that expressed desire.
    Tossing the laundry rope towards Edith, Debbie moved her body into mine, and placing her hands upon my shoulders, she firmly pushed me back into the rough bark of the tree that was directly behind me. Feeling my reluctance at being placed in a helpless position, Debbie leaned closer to me whispering that it was now time for me to learn to play with the big girls, to relax and enjoy what was to come. Running her hands over my shoulders, soothing my nerves, she leaned in and took my lips between her, nibbling on them with her teeth, as I felt Edith slipping one end of the rope between us, pulling it out on the other side, growing taunt against my belly as she moved behind the tree, taking the ends of the rope with her. I could feel the tension of the rope as it wrapped around the tree. Coming back around us, Edith again slid the rope between us and repeated the process of taking it around the tree where she tied it tightly. Feeling myself trapped against the tree, I could only moan as Debbie began to play with my clit while continuing her tender assault on my mouth. When Edith came back into view, Debbie moved away from me, inspecting the handiwork that Edith had done, before instructing Edith to strip for her. I watched as slowly Edith removed her clothes, teasing us with dancer’s movements, gyrating her lithe form as each article seemingly melted away with her touch. Standing before Debbie in her natural form, she cupped her breasts in her hands and moved towards her friend, offering the pale globes as a precious gift. As Debbie took a nipple into her mouth, Edith let her head fall back as deep moans of satisfaction escaped her lips, bringing forth more wetness from my own neglected needs.
    It was with envy that I watched as Edith moved her hands to her friend’s shoulders, pushing her down so that her mouth came within inches of Edith’s shaved mound. Enviously I watched as Debbie’s mouth covered Edith’s cunt, with Edith using Debbie’s head as a brace to balance herself as she opened her legs more to accommodate her friend’s hunger.
    With my hands being free, I once again found myself with my hands between my legs; taking what pleasure I could while watching them perform before me. 
    Hearing my moans of satisfaction, Debbie looked up from Edith and laughed at the picture I presented, tied to a tree with moonlight shimmering off my body, a hand playing with my nipples while the other hand busy working furiously in my cunt. Getting up from Edith, she moved to the bag removing the rest of the items, handed Edith the plantain, telling her to lay on the ground with her legs open towards us, and came to me with the paddles and cucumber.
    Not able to take my eyes off Edith as she began to work the plantain into her wetness, I felt the shock rippling through my body before the pain of the smack that Debbie gave my breasts with the paddle.
    “When I am before you, you are to look only at me, not at anything else that is going on around you. Is that understood?”
    Feeling tears welling up behind my eyes at the sudden pain, I could only nod my head to show that I understood.
    “To help you from looking at places you aren’t supposed to look at, I think a little blindfold might come in handy.”
    Debbie then tied a scarf around my eyes, blinding me in darkness as I stood before her in my nakedness.
    “No matter what you feel, you are not to make a sound?” Again I was only able to nod my head in agreement as I felt the paddle smack down on my other breast. Unable to cry out from the pain, I bit my teeth into my lips, trying to hold my body still under Debbie’s relentless assault with the paddle. My skin was burning with heat from each blow, causing a new stirring deep within my depth, wanting the pain to end and yet continue at the same time.
    With the attack ended, I could see nothing but hear the leaves under Edith as she moved on the ground, grunting in an animalistic way as she continued to strive for her release.
    Drawing in a deep breath, I felt the pins as Debbie placed them on nipples, pinching the erectness, causing them to swell more from the grip. The pain quickly became minuscule as I felt Debbie spreading my legs apart, and then a new round of attacks from the paddle on my exposed thighs. Letting out a cry against my will, I felt my legs trembling with each smack, wanting to buckle under me, and I felt as if the rope was the only thing that was keeping me on my feet.
    “I told you not to make a sound.” Debbie didn’t sound angry but rather disappointed in my ability to obey. “To earn your pleasure, you need to learn to obey me, after all the command I gave you was an easy one, and yet one that you are having trouble following. Don’t you want to please me and have your release?”
    Afraid of speaking, once again I nodded.
    I could hear Debbie moving away from me and disappointment flooded my body as I thought she was leaving me in disgust at my failure. It was with a sense of relief that I heard her footsteps rustling the leaves as she returned. Willing my body to remain still, I accepted the scarf that she placed on my mouth, opening my mouth as instructed, I accepted the thin fabric between my teeth, not making a sound at the biting pain it brought to the corners of my mouth as I felt Debbie tying it tightly behind my head. Not knowing how I knew, I knew that I had brought this upon myself and that I could only redeem myself by accepting what Debbie offered me.
    Hearing the leaves under her feet, I could tell Debbie had again moved away from me. I could hear her talking softly to Edith, and the sound of their kissing soon reached my ears. Only seeing in my mind’s eyes, I could picture them as Debbie took Edith’s hand away from the plantain, replacing it with her own as she helped Edith to reach the ecstasy that she had been striving for. Scared to move my hands back down to my own aching desires, I could only listen to Edith’s soft screams of pleasure as her climax consumed her body. Trying to maintain my own burning hunger, I squeezed my thighs together, bringing pressure to my clit as I listened to Edith’s satisfaction as she reached different heights of her climax. Tightening and loosening my thigh muscles, feeling the flames dancing deep inside, I could only choke back my moans as Edith’s uneven breathing filled the air.
    When I thought I couldn’t stand it anymore and was on the verge of begging, begging for what I wasn’t certain, just wanting to release the anxiety that was building up within me, I heard them as they stood up, still whispering words that I couldn’t hear, and moved towards me. Not a word spoken now, I could only guess at what they were doing.
    Feeling hands on my breasts, tweaking the pins as they held my firm nipples, I was only too happy to comply as my legs were gently pulled apart by another pair of hands. Biting even harder into the fabric between my teeth, I felt the tension between my legs flowing out as a hard object was thrust deep within me. Rising and lowering my body as much as I could with the rope holding me against the tree,  I began to meet each thrust of the foreign object that was plunging away, riding it, accepting it in me, needing it in me, needing it to quench my thirst of lust. The fingers playing with my swollen nipples only exciting my body more, making my body demand the release that it has been so far denied.
    I wasn’t sure who and at this point I didn’t really care who, but someone whispered in my ear telling me to cum for her. Relaxing my body, riding the cascade of pleasure, I gave myself over to the emotion, feeling the liquid that had consumed me draining from my core as I threw my head back against the tree and gave way to the climax that I had been granted. Wave after wave, convulsion after convulsion, my body climbed heights that I have never known before.
    After my release and a few moments to recapture myself, the blindfold and gag were removed and I looked into the eyes of the ones who had brought me to this new level of desire. Their eyes were dancing with amusement and merriment as they realized what I now knew, that I was now one of them, their path was to be my path, and their ways was to be my way, that I now belonged to them.
    Releasing me from the tree, they each embraced me in a lover’s embrace before slowly pulling apart so that we could dress.
    Gathering up the items that were bought at Wal-Marts at what seemed like a lifetime ago, we walked back to the car with arms around each other. I couldn’t wait to get back to their place as my lessons continued.

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  • plainoljoe
    November 17, 2007

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    holy hard on!!! girls. this is the best I've seen in months. Tell us more about the next leson learned

    the Satyr


    • shimmer
      November 17, 2007
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      tell or invite you in to partake of the teaching?


  • Desire gold member
    November 16, 2007

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    Holy Moly!!


    I need a squeegee
    You took us on a tale where the monitor melts...
    Yes You sure did~~~

    Love the Walmart part
    and the blindfold plus gag....
    Ooooooooooooooooooooh much to envision

    Love it!!!!
    You are gooooooooooooooooood at stories!!
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent Beautiful!
    Keep that quill dancing~~~~
    Best wishes to You in the side challenge
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~

    • shimmer
      November 17, 2007
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      lol at the squeegee,

      squeegees in aisle four, i wonder what that could be used for.

      thank you for kind remarks. this was a fun story to write for and it is interesting at all the different paths everyone took on here with their story.


  • tanzanite
    November 16, 2007

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    Wow!!!!! Well done!!! You outshone my little entry by so much. This was wonderful, wonderful stuff. You sure know how to steam up a screen. I loved it - loved the Walmart trip as well.Great work hun. I have to find more time to read others' work.

    • shimmer
      November 16, 2007
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      from what i have seen, every entry so far have left monitors steamed up, and your entry left the hint of a promise to steam up even more monitors if you continue with it which i hope you do. i want more from you

      oh yeah i'm greedy


  • Arkbear gold member
    November 13, 2007

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    Uncle!!!!

    I give up!

     

    :)

     

    You win!

     

    I am just not able to pen about women........but you sure Are!

     

    Good luck to you,

     

     

    Bear ~

    • shimmer
      November 13, 2007
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      lmao, you give up????? oh please, you are one of the best writers i have had the privelege of reading. personally i rather pen about men but i guess women can be fun too


  • Master Ktulu silver member
    November 13, 2007

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    It seems that this story has taken quite a detour...lol

    I rather enjoyed this version....especially the wal-mart trip. Good luck to you in this little side challenge.

    **Master Ktulu**


    • shimmer
      November 13, 2007
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      thank you Master Ktulu, first the song and now the story, is there anything else??????

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