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The Anthem of November

The night is chill, the dawn is soon,
and music that will make you swoon
and sway just like the ancient trees
softly in the midnight breeze,
is playing, tunes I still remember,
that sweet anthem of November.
It sings to me and calms the soul,
a treasure worth far more than gold,
as I look up-- the trees, they dance,
to the crickets and their chants,
their sillouhettes against the moon,
a shining silver great balloon.
All the world is yet asleep,
dreaming in their slumber deep,
and yet here we see our dreams
under shining silver moonbeams.
They sing to us a lullaby,
under the moon, under the sky,
the song of all the sage, old stars;
tonight they don't seem all that far.
If I listen close, I'll hear
whispered secrets in my ear,
the things that I knew all along,
revealed again by that old song.
O, that song-- I still remember
that sweet anthem of November!

-D.B.


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  • Adios Muchachos gold member
    November 30, 2007
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    Hey Dan

    Very remarkable poem. I grinned just reading the very first line!

    John

  • crosscountry07
    November 13, 2007

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    Xel, you are just amazing!
    "If I listen close, I'll hear
    whispered secrets in my ear,
    the things that I knew all along,
    revealed again by that old song."
    Those are my favorite lines! Keep it up man!
    -Liz


  • Mrs. Mautino
    November 13, 2007

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    Love, this is such a beautiful write! I love everything about it and for once, i have nothing negative to say about it! Excellent job, Hun. Your words truely amaze me

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    November 13, 2007

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    Good job Dan. You should write an anthem for every month if you feel up to it. After all your writing has such originality. Thanks for sharing. Well done.
    Brian