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RECYCLABLE PEOPLE - prompt

A scarred soul,

walks through

life's empty,

one-way turnstyle

of reusable pain...

 

 

 

~ A faceless plastic spirit,

recycled upon societies

judging conveyor...

In a list

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  • Kari gold member
    November 15, 2007

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    You have wrote something that is really good and has a lot of truth in it. Very well done on getting the gold here


  • mysticstorm gold member
    November 13, 2007

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    WOW! Deep and so true. We live in a world where everything is disposable, even people, well done.
    Love the closing stanza.
    Hits home so well.

    Thank you for entering!