Have you ever;
Felt like you have found the one;
To spend you life with
And love forevermore
Your true companion
Destined lover and soulmate
Always thinking of that person,
Whatever the circumstances
So I ask you this now:
Have you ever been in love?
A contest entry
- Have you ever...? by Exodus.
2550 points, ended November 27, 2007, 38 entries
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Comments
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YES!
with you
and i hope to be for a long long time
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good poem...good question!
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How can you explain what being in-love means? Everybody has a different take on this-all I know is I couldn't do without my hub' or he without me...Must be something holding us together-and it aint glue!
Thoughtful write on a subject that can be difficult to analyse at times.x
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daily Great poem!!!! sorry 4 no points i always give all mine away
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I think this could do with a little bit of punctuation but other than that you pose your question well to the reader. Lovely work, thank you
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I thought I was once
This is really good. The build up of emotion, although quick, is so true, so real. I liked at the end how you turn it unto the reader as a question.
"Your true companion
Destined lover and soulmate..."well done.
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Thank you so much
-Steve-
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