looking into the night
I can't stop myself from saying good-bye.
Good-bye to the life I once knew,before,
Before I meet you..
Now that I have you I can't help,
But look at things anew.
Feeling emotions that I thought once died
pounding,showing me just how much I can love you.
Waiting, for the time when I stand before my people
And show the world how much I will give just to be with you.
Waiting for the time when I say, I do..
Because I love you..
A contest entry
- I want your best! anything goes, Also hurry because i hate waiting! by urapns66.
350 points, ended April 1, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
sorry if it sucks but I haven't written something in a long time..
Comments
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This is awesome! i would totally applaud but alas all my points are going into this comment lol but yeah I definitely enjoyed the fourth stanza:
"Feeling emotions that I thought once died
pounding,showing me just how much I can love you."
such a wanting tone very well expressed kudos on that. yeah i do definitely like this one pretty good flow, and that i like a lot!
whelp keep up the good work and good luck! -
I agree with the comment below.
It is a lovely write expressing soft emotion xx Well done xx
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this poem is beautiful
i love this poem this fits to alot of people good work
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