Have you ever regretted
doing something so much,
were so stressed out about it,
that you wanted to
say sorry but couldn't
because you knew
it would cause you
to break down
and cry?
A contest entry
- Have you ever...? by Exodus.
2550 points, ended November 27, 2007, 38 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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Oh yes but it is still close to the bone and not for me to write about on here just yet.
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This is a really sad feeling poem but it is good to feel and everyone feels like this at some time. A really nice poem.
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Have I ever, never thought I would,but have experienced it..and I appreciate your words, because we are all vulnerable at times, and mistakes in judgment, too quickly made, or hurting someone unintentionally, knowing someone is suffering, because of maybe something hurtful to them,when it is the last thing you would ever want to do...yes, I have been there..and all the stress, wanting to make all things right again...Yes dear G...thanks for expressing your human frailities and admitting your emotions...So well, and profoundly written, and thank you, friend...We must take these things to God who alone can make our mistakes into blessings, and the pain and reconciliation will come...Bravo!
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I have and it taught me humility and humbleness, so it assist me to keep my feet on the ground. Nice read. f
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Interesting choice of subject to write on. This is something so many people can identify with, and I think that is part of what makes a good poem.
Thank you for your entry.
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Great work as always Good luck!!!
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