have you ever felt
like crying
while knowing that in your whole life
you have never been
this happy?
A contest entry
- Have you ever...? by Exodus.
2550 points, ended November 27, 2007, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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very nice
seej

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I liked this, short, simple yet has more than a point.


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How sad good luck in
the contest -
Im with Friday on this one been there done it and the meds aint strong enough. great job and best wishes in the contest.
Tory -
Several times. That's why I have meds

This was great, short and to the point while still leaving the reader thinking about what you've said.
Thank you
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