Have you ever...
felt the warm touch,
soft breath or heard
the sweet tantalizing
words from someone you love
have you ever ...
been in love ?
A contest entry
- Have you ever...? by Exodus.
2550 points, ended November 27, 2007, 38 entries
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Yep! It's a feeling you can't describe because there isn't a word that describes the way it feels!!
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Very nicely stated. Nice content, good imagery. Good luck in the contest.
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great message and thought in 50 words or less. Impressed. great job and best wishes to you in this contest.
Tory
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I like the word usage.
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"Tantelizing" is actually spelt "Tantalizing". This was a sweet piece. Gentle and soft
Thank you
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thank you i'll change that
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A short write fill with passion ..very sweet and soothing
There should be a comma after touch and it should be tantalizing
Love the write..
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thank you i'll change that
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