Oh God
it is preached that a human profile is the faultless framework
as it has no infirmity amongst all the enduring forms
it is accurate but yet I do experience that it is not exemplary
as it does not enclose the wings
while the longs to fly in the heart are ample
this way the human configuration is not a prototype
I acquiesce that the soul in a human shape is more competent
as it can evaporate, it can convert, it can elevate
it can disclose and conclusively it can stretch to you too
which a human circumscribe can't do
Oh God...
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Amazing. Thank you very much for this exquisite write.
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This is well written, thanks for the entry.
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Well written I enjoyed this
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"It can disclose and conclusively it can stretch you too
which a human circumscribe can't do...Your words are like a soft flower petal my friend.
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powerful and I find no words to explain except I understand the need to fly, yet do not understand as to why. I often dream of flying.
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Oh my!
Powerfully filled with spirit life. I did enjoy this very much. Well done. Best of luck in this contest. ~Pamela
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well done once again here. great imagery and word choice. great flow. best wishes to you in this contest.
Tory
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