I can see you
Waitting for me
I wait for you too
Waitting with glee
In the dark shadows i watch you
I love you so much
Do you love me too
I just want your touch
Im waitting for you
I'm just waitting to see
Do you love me too
Forever, will you love me
Do you like someone thats dosnt even know you exist?
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Hm, I'm not exactly sure what it is...but I feel like it's missing something. Something of length...I don't mean to sound me, it's how I judge, but in my tastes, this poem...is empty and somewhat...written in like two minutes. Would it be easier if I wrote a poem in which you can "respond" to and um...er...something? You don't have to take my advice, but it'd definitely earn ya lots of brownie points.
Thank you for entering and good luck.
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