a soft kiss
a sharp breath
a flash of teeth
a marked neck
all i can see in the thick darkness
is the soft glow of the stars
in your eyes
every taste of your soft milky skin
sweet with the salt of our passion,
your sighs
every breath is thick with your perfume
musky and sweet
and i can't get enough
every move of our dance through the darkness
impulsive and quick, just two spirits
in love
a deep kiss
a soft mew
just me
loving you
embracing as lovers, unwilling to part
as skin clings tightly to skin in the dark
and sweat runs it's course in miniature streams
down the back of an angel
the girl of my dreams
Please tell me what you think
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i love it. the passion of the two in the poem is amazing
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you say that now =p
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yeah, came back to read it. I still love it. Something just seems to click with the last three lines.
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ur awesome
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omg
supurbly awesome
i loved it!
im speechless
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*reading it again*
and
i still love it
as much as i did the first time
it's so incredible
I'm very much jealous of your writing ability..
and your last verse
ties the whole thing together so awesomely
yeah
hmmmm
I passed ITS
Love you
Miss you -
<3
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breathless..
now THAT
is
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wow.. its different but me likes it... its.... well im kinda lost for words.... its one of those sensual love poems ... and its sweet in sexual innocence..... or sumthin lol. well its great! ... ur really good at poems. u talented bum u!!! lmao.
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Wow. I am in total awe of this poem. I don't quite know how to describe what I am feeling at the moment. But the poem is awesome, so it is all good.
But yessem. I love this one. It's just so natural, and beautiful, and makes really pretteh pictures in my head.
((Had to insert a DIRTY comment here... it was in my head!))
Love it muchly.
Love you muchly.
See. Waiting patiently has its rewards.
You should write much more often - your poems are always great. Therefore (as always) I must make a comment about stealing your talent, cause I wants it. It should be mine - precious! Haha.
But seriously. Amazing poem. Pretty Imagery.
Muchly Love
LLT
Me.
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pretty :]
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Sentimental without the usual soppiness which so easily couldve creeped in....
Lucky girl...
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*sigh* i wish i could write like this...
you're too brilliant for your own good, i think im gonna kidnap you and make you write poems and then ill take all the credit and people will think that I'M the brilliant one lol
or maybe ill just ask santa to bring me some brilliance for Christmas =P
in other words i love it lol
awshum job =)
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I love it
it's really good
and a new one from you
which is good
this has some great imagery
and so
i dno how to explain it
lol
awesomeness
and greatness
and yeah
youness
to it
i love it
=]
you should teach me to be as good as you
then it would be fair
=]
lol
love you
miss you
my army boyy
=]
meeeee
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i love the last 3 lines, my favorite, well done.
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