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When Silence Speaks

Silence speaks for itself,

See the darkness of this? 

Always asks the question, 

Whoever has the answer?

 

A woman opens the sentiment, 

A tear in her chest, 

A womb in her heart,

A sigh in the prayer,

A gift to her child,

A world from her love. 

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  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    November 12, 2007
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    Welcome to all poetry!
    This is very well done; very creative and very well worded!
    Wishing you much joy and happiness here at AP! Thank you for sharing your poetry!


  • rite
    November 12, 2007

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    Words are property of the illusion that we may use to arrive at silence one time. Emotion crosses the borders of many worlds offering us teleportation to places and times away from the limited world of words. I believe you've quite skillfully applied that in this poem. Welcome to AP and thank you for creating and sharing. Take care,

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    • Gildon
      November 12, 2007
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      Thank you very much. I appreciate your words.