When you smile at me
I see true beauty
Unfold and magnify
As to you my heart does show.
I love you more
Than I did yesterday
And though at times
It's hard to find the right words to say.
I promise you now
That I'll spend
Each moment in awe
In amazement of you.
When you love someone
The way that I do
It's hard to breathe
Without knowing they feel it too.
A contest entry
- All for Love! by Auburn Sunrise.
1000 points, ended November 13, 2007, 13 entries
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This is for a contest doesn't meet prompt but meets title of contest if that counts. Does it?
Comments
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Very nice.
A very nice writing here. Love always does this to us. Fine work.
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This is a beautiful and very loving poem
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Awe! This is so sweet I like it, great write
Leslie -
Lovely!
I think this is such a sweet poem especially the end line xD
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very sweet
me likes it it is very sweet
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G'Day mate
♥
What a beautiful write, I adore the third stanza
Best of luck in the contest
Stay safe
~Amanda
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beautiful poem full of love for someone. She must feel very special knowing you make her feel this way . Blessings to you alwasy and best to you in the contest
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Ohhh this is stunning It is always nice to know someone loves you in return... Great piece.
Delila
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Yes it counts!!!
I love the vulnerability expressed in this piece. I know this feeling all too well, so it really meant something to me. This poem reached into the depths of my more delicate side and struck a high-pitched chord that is still reverberating as I write this.
Fascinating... I'm so glad you entered this contest!
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This is beautiful! You really expressed your emotions well in this poem. Great job!
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Nicely written. I enjoyed this poem, the flow was great as was the emotion.
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