I look at myself
in this mirror
and now i see
that my reflection is no longer of me
it's of my pain
my emotional hurt
this life I've lived
this anguish I've suffered
my life is a lie now
and i can't see the light
the only time I'm happy is when I'm with him
but what do i do
all those time's I'm alone
do i just lock myself up
in my room and let no one in
or do i tell someone other the he whom i love
and try and let him help me
I'm crying now
for fear that this will end
in some obscure way
and he'll never forgive me
god won't someone help me
Author notes
IDK wat to do right now i'm going through some hard times so i put it into poem form as i used to do
What do you think of this one?
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(Sniffles.) It makes me sad. At the same time, it makes me feel...sad. Just...sad. Very well written. I give it a 8 out of 10. ^_
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mirror mirror....
hard times and a broken compass...arghhh...its always a good time to look at ones self and take inventory... The mirror...whether metaphor or not, that important question..'who am I', is positive reassurance you are self aware and not lost. Knowing its not you in the mirror, is self evident you would recognize the woman in the looking glass, stripped of life's layers and cloaks that shroud the vision that is truly you. Just beyond the pain,.....the relentless rain...is your quiet heart, born of innocence ...the woman you can love.
-Darmok
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Thanx
Sorry it took so long to reply to your comment on my poem Refeltion Changed. Your comment was very much filled with insight into the way one thinks when writing a poem such as that. Thank you very much for your comment and i hope to hear more of what you have to say about my other poems. Though some of them aren't that great or well written.
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