Walking the halls
head hung down
Watching as people flash her a permanent frown
walking alone , Time as it flies
Tuning into silent lies
eyes averted
looking skyward
Why!Why!
she shouts to the sky
collapse
struck by sudden sadness
Crying silent tears
Trying to release all her fears
Looking up
sees nothing
Keeps walking
but no talking
walking to the song of the fife
walking into life life life
Author notes
Notsotorturedartist
A contest entry
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Comments
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Very well done! Thank you for showing your talent in this contest. Your entry was really very well done!
All the best
Becks
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Great poem.
I really enjoyed reading it.
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This is wonderful...How the world can stike you down, pass you by, but yet how it can pick you back up and make you rise. Thank you so much for sharing, and best of luck to you as well!
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Excellent.
I like this, reminds me of an old song I worked on once, may try to resurrect it.
Well done.
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Extremely good! keep it up!!!
--soulgirl1221
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