I think I’m done here
And now the curtain's closed
I think we’re done here
And I need you to know
I’m over the pain
And I’m over you
I’m done with this game
And our time is through
Now I got to know
That I can still be free
So you got to let me go
You got to let me be
Was it as good for you
As it was bad for me
Will you be happy now
In your misery
Because it’s all you cause
And it’s all you breath
And I’m over it now,
Don’t you dare miss me.
A contest entry
- This is your opportunity to write about your life by only1love4ever.
758 points, ended November 27, 2007, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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wow, what a breakup1, very well said! I like the way you really do not display any anger, although at first glance some may seem this to be the case, this is not the case really at all, only the search, that is many times for the better!
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I agree. I loved the ending as well.
This is a good poem and I'm glad you can write about the troubles you've had.
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This was extraordinary. I love the way the ending goes. It really sets off the entire poem. "Dont you dare miss me." It adds character. Thank you and good luck!
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amazing..
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