Clock keeps
ticking back
to a sun when
second hands
brushed gentle
by your face
and moved you
for a minute
that would
last a lifetime.
Author notes
PROMPT: "Time cannot erase all of the mistakes we've made"
A contest entry
- Quote and PIC PIF QUICKIE by ZachP.
300 points, ended November 12, 2007, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is powerful indeed. Such a very in depth take on the prompt. Deeply touching, and wonderfully penned!
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simple and powerful with lovely images
nicely done, and good luck in the contest
thanks for entering
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Thanks. Great prompt.
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Oh this is sensational...... I Love it.
This a gem best of luck to you in the contest
Delila
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AWWWWWW
This is just beautiful,elegant and make me ponder the thought with deep affliction...The kind that really hurts...Have read it 5 times and still get the same feelings...Good Penning
Blessings and Good Luck
~Cheryl~
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So simple, yet so elegant - I loved this. Best of luck to you!
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Simply beautiful. Short, simple and yet the words hold strength in depth. Very nice imagery penned.
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