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The Song of My Heart

My heart dances
In moderate tempos
Sometimes when
I see you.

Other times
My heart prances
To a lento tone.

Whether the music be
Staccato or legato
My heart loves
Every root.

A contest entry

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  • HerbalGoat
    November 23, 2007
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    I like the shortness of this piece and how it explains ones love so well.

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    November 13, 2007
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    great

    Beautiful! We need to listen to our hearts every day. Our hearts do sing a song to us; sometimes happy, sometimes sad. No matter the message, it's always something important. A wonderfully expressed poem. Sounds Mattie Stepanek like. Good luck in the contest. Brian