Feel loves hug
Conceal it in your soul
Enveloping arms abounding
Ending the sadness.
He whom had needeth a hug
Unto he it is given
Gracefully and lovingly
Given freely
Simplicity's tears fade away.
A simple hug today may be tomorrow's promise.
A contest entry
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A simple hug may be tomorrow's promise.
So true, this poem was very good, the moment I read the title I was like "this poem is going to be great" and it was really good...
Thanks for entering and good luck! -
content 6
vocabulary 10.75
accuracy 7.5
creativity 7
theme 7
originality 7
total 37.75
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Oh you are so right a loveing hug can do so much healing thank you for these lovely words
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THis is a good write. Solid and fun. It's meaning may be deeper than the simplicity it shows.
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Very cute, very friendly. I love the intrakit simplicity you have in this poem.
Good luck in my contest,
Vivien
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very good
Thanks for the entry into the contest and good luck -
That is just an amazing closing line, and so true, too
thank you for entering, and good luck in the contest.
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Oh this is so sweet
Best of luck to you in the contest
Delila
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Love that last line and the hopefulness its sings.
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A simple hug today may be tomorrow's promise.
So very true!
And who doesn't love a good hug?
Nice write, and good luck in the contest!
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