I told you time and time again,
I love you,
I love you,
And I love you.
I told you that I would do anything,
spilling my secrets and my heart.
Only you couldn't take it and hurt me.
I hurt you once,
I know that.
I fell in love with you.
Was that right?
I would do anything to have you.
I would give myself up for you.
Everyday you are with her I cry.
I have done my stupid crap,
like cutting and overdosing,
but I haven't died yet.
I would give you all I am if I could.
But you would reject it.
But still I will try,
to get your love,
and have you love me back.
I'm sorry and I regret hurting you.
I love you,
I love you,
And I love you.
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I can't say who it is but I love him... I feel like he doesn't know that though.
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- Lost love and getting it back by useles.
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...dmae. who is this mystery person???
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You know whom...
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...me?
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Powerful!
Such love and sorrow in this piece. You have done a wonderful job with it, it flows superbly. Good luck in your contest
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Very powerful, and I totally understand where you're coming from. I hate it that other people have to go through the "i love him, but he doesn't love me back" bullshit. it sucks, i know. hopefully you have found or will find someone to love you for you. hopefully he'll fade into the past, never forgotten, but moving on. great job.
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