I just whispered your name
Could you hear me?
Your presence is much needed
And I’m not trying to sound conceited
But I want you to be mine
For now and until the end of time
Always and forever
In our own little world
I’ve never felt anyone so proud
To have me as their girl
Author notes
This was a special prompt - I always enjoy Hugs!
XOXOXO
A contest entry
- Quote and PIC PIF QUICKIE by ZachP.
300 points, ended November 12, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love Poems by LissaRox.
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• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Hugs make the world go one with love and support.
Won't it be wonderful at times to stay safely in our own world surround by love. Beautiful dream.
Lovely words of peace and comfort.
Love,
mom
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Cute!:)
I liked it's simplicity. Point well taken. Have a good day hun! I hope you have a better day then most recently.
Loves,
PoirsBaby
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This is so very sweet, and completely heart felt. A very touching piece you have penned here, leaving a content sigh of hope. To be loved is one of the greatest feelings in the world - when you truly feel how special it is deep inside. Nicely penned!
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For a short poem, this is well done, and the emotion is portrayed very well! I loved it! Best of luck in the contest!!!
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For ten lines, this is so sweet
I love this
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Nice... Sweet take here. Best of luck to you in the contest
Delila
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Awe that is so cute and I love
your picture prompt! All the best
to you with this one my dear! Keep
it up and thanks a lot for sharing it!
Jeremy0826
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Love the questioning begining
and the wrap up was like a hug in itself.
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Great penning here...I too love them hugs,and I love the personal effect you penned within your write...
Blessings and Good Luck
~Cheryl~
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The second stanza stood out nicely. A beauty expression.
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