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Kep

Adam is a good person
He doesn't swear
Or Drink, Smoke or Take Drugs
He would never make a joke at someone worse off than Himself
And he is comfortable with who he is.

Adam doesn't care what he looks like
The clothes he wears
And the way his hair is do not matter to him

Adam isn't disrespectful
He likes to pay attention at college
And gets good a good education
Adam will succeed in life
No Doubt about that!

Adam is, as one might say
The perfect person
He is the son every mother would want
He doesn't care about cool
He likes to do what he likes to do

Kep is who Adam hides behind
Kep is a presentable person
He needs to be liked
Kep isn't perfect
He loves to get out of his face
And mess around
Because he makes people laugh
And is known to be a complete idiot

Kep likes to look good
His hair needs to be perfect -
It is his confidence

Kep tries hard at college
But is too tired
He isn't organised
And will probably fail
Adam see's this,
And when Adam is in control he works
But Kep is the cool one
And Kep can shine through

Kep and Adam are friends
They have their similarities
They are induvidual
And despite wanting to look cool
Kep speaks his mind
And does what he likes
Adam respects this

Adam and Kep are both tattered people
They are fragmented in their minds
They argue all the time

If Adam was ever killed
And Kep was left alone
Then Kep would kill himself
Because only Adam can stop him

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  • Stormraven
    November 13, 2007
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    Thank you for entering my contest , and big huggss to both of you , smiles , Storm