Suicide is nothing but the cowards way out of life.
If you so choose to follow such a path,
Remember that those who once have heard these words
Will fall upon your grave and shed no tears, for they know.
Their grief will remain in their hearts, and never fall upon the ground.
A contest entry
- TO QUOTE YOURSELF (contest by sinnastarr) by Sinnastarr.
690 points, ended November 29, 2007, 50 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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you know nothing about depression, do you? its not about being too scareed to face something, but being to tired of facing the same crap over and over again and nothing getting better and everything getting worse until you just snap because you dont have the mental capacity to do it all over again.
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i wrote this, and i don't expect to have people like you tell me shit about something i face every day. those words up there. are words. don't fucking preach to me about shit you've no idea of my life and i'm tired of dealing with people like you who think they know all the shit in the fucking world. step off.
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sorry, i didnt mean it like that. its just i thought you were one of those people who thinx that lifes always great and nyone who thinx otherwise is retarded. i just hate people like that. srry if that was judgemental of me. it was a good write tho. and i wasnt trying to preach, just saying. srry 4 tha misunderstanding
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whatever it's cool. i have a massive headache people have too much drama and some people misinterpret things. it happens.
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This was a powerfull piece. You portrayed your thoughts well here. I also like the over all flow of this piece.
Good job.
Thank you so much for entering my contest and I wish you the best of luck.
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