I have fallen in love,
I don’t know if it’s the right thing
But I love him,
He is sweet, kind
And I think he likes me
As much as I like him
My friends don’t think he’s
A good guy for me
But I still love him
I have found someone I can talk to
And be comfortable with,
It makes me feel good,
But way are my friends
Making a big deal about it?
Why do they care?
As long as I am happy,
Why do they care?
I’m happy,
So why don’t they support me?
Why don’t they think he’s a good guy?
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John root????
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no this was a different guy.....
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i have 2 delete half of my poems now
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why?
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Countrygurlva
Hay, just like wht cori said...I don't excally hate him,...it's just, ..I'm worried about how hard it wioll be fro your heart to mend after he leaves you!!!
LOVE YA!! VA!!
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ok wtf!!!!!!!!! dont remind me about that shit (sorry about the use of language)
that was a long time ago and please read ALL the coments befor u say anything. it will explain A lot and how megan was being a bitch (again sorry) and ya i better stop
sorry a little bitchy right now sorry im not mad at u or anything so ya
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One step at a time.....
I'm happy for you! I'm sorry that your family doesn't like you and him together.... But.....Nice Write!
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hmmmmmm i feell very bad for not writing alot so lalalalalalalalalaqlalalalalal blah blah nice poem.....dfhjdifgbhdsglfgudhfjigyhsfjvunflduyhi i still dont think thats enough so....................... I do agree with megan a little bit, your aready saying that you love him, and thiss is like the 3rd day..... im sorry if that sounded mean....I also feel sorry for you cause everyone doesnt odviously like you and him together...i wasnt that happy in the beggening, but now i dont really care, as long as my tina is happpy i think thats long enough....
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ok ok, i was reading what i fekt and if u guys asked about what the poem ment i wont be pissed so i will tell u what i ment when i said i loved him
i was happy that i had a boyfriend, also i was happy i found a boyfriend that i felt comfub;e around,
i never did feel right around cuck so i was happy i felt right atound keith, im not saying that i love him love him.
and its fine i like short coments
and i really dont know why every one dosnt like him so im confused. but thank u
love ya
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I agree with those two
I feel like your are deffinatly getting way in over your head.You've known him for how long and your already saying you love him in this poem?
And yes your friends "dont like him"
But its because you are my bestfriend and I dont think ANYONE is good enough for you.I dont know...there is also this quality about him that makes me nervous.I just dont trust him either.But Im happy that you're happy.
Why do they care?
As long as I am happy,
Why do they care?
I’m happy,
So why don’t they support me?
that is true but you should have acted that way about me and Chris.As long as I was happy you should have been happy for me and supported me.
Im glad you wrote a poem based on your feelings,
however it seemed more like a column or a story rather than a poem.Not just the rhyming factor but it didnt seem to flow even without the rhymes.It seemed more like a documentary or journal entry.Just try and make it more poetic.Just a suggestion.
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ok, so yes i should have supported u. but im not the one, trying to kill my boyfriend and im sorry but leave him alone all he wants is to hug me is that soo wrong? and so what if he kissed me on my HEAD..... he's not going to come between us so STOP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
im getting really pissed,so just stop and as i said ima big girl, so just STOP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -
how am i over my head???,so why keith?? why didnt u like cuck?? he was weirder than him, and why cant i say i love him??? i would never tell him i love him until i feel its the right time. and stop worrying about me sooooooo much, im a big girl.
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aww.. I'm happy for you! I just don't want you to get hurt..... he seems really nice, but you only known him for like a week.... and I think things are going so fast that some of your other friends can't handle it... I agree with cori... you've only known him for soo short and to be saying you LOVE him is just hard on us.... We are all worried but happy because your happy ....
just don't forget us friends
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i know u are worryed i will get hurt, but i can tack care of mtself. i know that u guys are worried but come on do u think im that dume that i would let a guy, do anything to me that i didnt like?
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We don't think he's a bad guy, we're just worried for you.
And do you really think it's a good idea to say that you love him even though you've known him for less that a year. Less than half a year.
I'm good as long as you're happy, but I'm still worried for you. And I always will be.
So get used to it.
Great poem though!
Love the picture.
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i know u arer worried but lay off some, its getting anoying. and i would never tell him that i know him, but i feel like,he's bettter than cuck, so i feel happy.so its fine, and ima big girl i can take care of myself
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Look, I don't think you're dumb, I'm just worried. And even if you tell me not to be, I can't help it.
And I'm not trying to kill him or break you guys up, so why are you mad at ME?
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i dont care if u are worryed but u keep telling me that u dont turst him and i would reallt like to know why, im confused, so ya
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I don't not trust him, I just don't know him.
I don't trust people for a long time after I've gotten to know them.
I'm happy that you are happy, I just want you to stay that way and not have to worry about him doing something stupid like hurting you.
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ok if he did ant thing stupid and hurt me ill kick hie ass...
and probely try and kill him so ya.....
but ya
love ya call me if u feel beter, and i really need to talk to u
feel beter
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i feel loved
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its fine, im just a little (a lot) pissed....so dont take it the wrong way
its just every one is just pissing me off. im sick and tired about every one saying that they dont turst him, and im sick of it.
ya i know im a bitch,
but oh well
love ya
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awww!!!!
do i know this person?
lovers<333
so sweet
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thank you,
u are the first one to say that and not complain about who im talking about,
so ya thanks again
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its your choice and from what i gather, they are worried about you and they just dont want you to be hurt and from mine i think its your life, but i dont want you hurt and from the sounds of it, hes a keeper :]
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YES HE IS A KEPPER and thank u, and i know but they tack it WAY to far. and i really hate it,and yes u are right it is mylife so ya,
love ya and thanks
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