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Cold And Dark

Reflections of smoky nothingness,
Make me sigh, make me sulk,
Shapes of black, shimmering against black,
Make me worry, make me scared,
Invisible time passing invisibly,
Makes me sad, makes me want,
Foreign sounds ringing deafeningly quiet,
Make me nervous, make me wary.

The cold and dark can manipulate and conquer,
If not for the strength of mind.

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  • livia michelle
    January 26, 2008
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    whoa really stong and meaningful
    the cold and dark can get to you
    then take over


  • Rose Chloris
    January 16, 2008

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    This is a cool poem. It is different. I like that it is short and manages to get the point across.


  • InMyFlames
    January 15, 2008

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    I love it!! the every second line is awesome i love how you did that "Shapes of black, shimmering against black,
    Make me worry, make me scared," these would have to be my favourite lines, well done


  • Olivias Violin
    November 12, 2007
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    VERY GOOD!