This path I'm on is getting real rough
I long to feel your loving touch
Not knowing where the road will end
I really miss my dear old friend
Once I believed everything on faith alone
Loved you more than life but now I don't
I know you're real but some things I can't believe
Times are getting to weird and so hard to concieve
You turned water into wine but I can't have a beer?
God is good;God is great...but I'm suppose to live in fear?
I need answers and I can't rely on your book
I need knowledge so I can have a look
I want to go to heaven if it is so divine
Show me that you're real...give me a sign
Being in the dark really blows, you know I hate it
If the devil sends people to hell, then why did you create it?
Author notes
thanks for reading it has been a long while again......but thanks.......my reason behind this is that i once believed but it ain't that easy anymore.....i need help lol
Please tell me what you think
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well first off great poem! very good question i love it! well im a christian if you ever have any ? you might like to ask me go right ahead! but i still love this poem plz right more
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Very great poem. Spiritually searching and definitely thought provoking. I commend you for penning your thoughts in such a beautiful way. One of the things people struggle with most is doubts. Doubting everything you know and love, and comparatively everything you don't understand. If you ever want to chat about the spiritual side of things, look me up. As for your poem, it's written very well. Good job.
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