When the day is young
the love bird sings
the prayer of
the day
For him there is no worries
to catch up with
no days wage to earn
his keep
Just sings, the song of
love and peace
A prayer of the day,unto Him
and to all creatures
of the Earth
A contest entry
- Thanks giving by Marctheman.
1010 points, ended November 23, 2007, 5 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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A beautifully simple poem... it does portray the carefree and blissful song of the bird wonderfully. It makes me feel peaceful.. thank you for entering.
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oh... Wow...
This is wonderful!
Beautiful!
thanks for entering,
and best of luck...
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great
i really enjoyed this.
so much come over in such few lines
quite a good write
xXx
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