Not a day goes by
Without nature's song
A ponder, a sigh,
Through virtuous eyes
His weavings belong
Like heavenly skies,
As four seasons rise
His wisdom grows strong.
A birthday wish flew
A feather apart
With tenderness true,
The poet in you
Inspired my heart
Revealing anew,
Each cloud you soar through
Pure love you impart
Dear brother I send
As blessings return
To you faithful friend,
With poetic pen
Such freedom I yearn
To weave from within,
Again, and again
Let bright candles burn.
Author notes
I hope you have your best ever brother~ "Happy Birthday"
In a list
A contest entry
- A Special Celebration! by Celticmoon.
2800 points, ended December 1, 2007, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very nice weaving of rhyme and rhythm into a personal response. Enjoyable to read and, I am sure, to receive.
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this was so grabbing and precious here i love my brother to death as well i enjoyed seeing the caring side take care
jewels
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Tim,
When it comes to penning words from the heart you certain are among the best. I do not doubt for a moment that your words spoke to Rich as they often speak to so many. Thank you for entering and joining the celebration. Best of luck to you!
Blessings
Bel
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True and beautiful words fromm the heart...I love this and I am sure he did too!
Lynda
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Tim, this is excellent, one of your best dedications, I feel. You have written some very amazing lines here to honor Rich on his birthday and the sincerity in your words is what also makes this such a warm and tender piece of poetry.
A very beautiful poem
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Nice poem, I especially like the rhythym, and the image it created in my mind.
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Such a very well written dedication for your friend. Sincere and hopeful wishes for this special day - and many more to come! Best wishes in the contest!
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Excellent
Very touching and thoughtful birthday poem. Best of luck in the contest
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aww this is so very beautiful...You are a beautiful poetic soul...smiles
Peace and much love
~A~
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Bro...you are the best...Had a great day but computer problems didn't let me see you until this morning...a modem issue...so I am thanksing you not for your amazing gift...take care Bro....
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Love ya my dear brother.
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Dearest Brother-O-Mime....This is so beautifully penned, dear man. Your words always reflect that huge generous heart of yours, and this warm and touching poem is no exception! "A birthday wish flew...a feather apart..." I adore these lines! Such wonderful images filled my head as i read them, and the imagery continues throughout this work of word art! Rich will surely love this, my dear brother. I know I do. Bravo!! A glorious gift of words from your heart. What better gift to give!! Love you!!
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Oh, what a beautiful and moving dedication to your brother. This was so heartfelt and moving, another wonderful piece from you.
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This is truly a fantastic dedication. I really enjoyed reading it. The imagery simply jumps off the page inhanced with the rhyme.
Love,
Amera♥
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How very sweetly written, my love brother!
I KNOW he will absolutely love this!
Wishing you all the very best!
Hugglers,
Sandy
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this is an amazing birthday card. You are an amazing poet. I wish you luck in the contest and the owner of your own greeting card company some day if you wish.
Smile,
Judy
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A beautifully dedicated piece which will surely be treasured! Good Luck for the contest! x
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Bravo
Well written with beautiful imagery. I reallly like the last four lines of the poem. Good luck in the contest..
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This is a very beautiful dedication, and very loving. Dedication poems to me are some of the best ones to read. I am sure you will have captured your brothers heart with this one ~blessings always~best to you in the contest
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Beautiful interweaving of spirituality and Nature.
A Gift Rich is sure to be pleased with for it speaks of those spaces where his heart seems to live. Blue
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Wonderful work here bro! Haven't seen you in a while.
Welcome back and it's great to read something from you again. Very inspiring and I love the imagery that flows throughout this. Well done and good luck to you in this contest! I am sure that he will love this when he reads it! Take care and thanks a lot for sharing this one here!
Jeremy0826
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This is indeed a great piece you penned for your brother. May he have many blessed ones.
Thanks for sharing your pen of inspiration.
Tory
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