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Confessions Of My Soul

I write the words to sink so deep
A passion that causes me
To lose all track of time
And leave me without a word to speak.

Here are the confessions of my soul
I love you more with each day
And sometimes I know
The right things I dare not say.

There was a time when I looked at you
And I felt my world changing from blue
I found a way into your heart
Baby, I loved you right from the start.

You have a part of me
That no one else does
A feeling of hope
And love set free.

When I find myself lost
You come rescue me
When things happen out of my control
I give you the confessions of my soul.

Author notes

Yes, I know that the options that are listed fo this contest are not met for this poem, but I tried to write a poem with the name of this contest. I dunno ifit's any good or not. What can I say? I'm a hopeless romantic.

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  • CherryOnTop
    November 13, 2007
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    This is beautiful. Thank you for entering my contest.


  • Karsis
    November 12, 2007

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    I don't usually like romantic poems,
    But I seem to write a lot of them lately.
    This was really good.
    Well written.
    Good luck in the contest.


  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    November 12, 2007

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    Excellant/romantic/intriguing

    I thought it 'twas a rather fine romantic write. Imagery, rhythm and rhyme were just fine. Again, very well done.


  • delightfulmess silver member
    November 12, 2007

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    Oh love this.... Very soulful... Nicely written
    you have very nice flow in your writing
    Good luck to you in the contest


    Delila


  • Arizona Sunset
    November 12, 2007

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    Very loving confessions from a persons soul. This was very sweetly written. Blessings to you always, and best to you in the contest!~

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