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Please.

Please,
                    never forget me.
Please,
                            don't leave me.
Please,
                                                                        please me.
Please,
      don't hurt me.
Please,
                                                        smile with me.
Please,                                don't laugh without me.

Please,                  hold me.

                           

                                Please love me.

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Thank you.

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  • Auburn Sunrise gold member
    November 12, 2007

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    Interesting!

    I love the format. It added so much to this short, simple piece. Without that formatting it wouldn't have been as interesting.
    I also loved the simple "Thank you." in that author's comments - very classy!
    Thank you for entering!