Your pretty eyes seduce me
into their wavy depths,
romance me with their dancing
and fluttering humoured jest,
they pull upon my heart strings
and make it twirl puppet pirouettes.
I am heated with those stares of yours,
mangled in their nets.
Those lips of your coerce me
into beastly kinds of thoughts,
your kisses capture and free me
into ecstacies of sorts,
they tickle at my soul
until my spirit seems to giggle.
I am breathless at their weight
and so under them I wiggle.
Your finger tips excite me,
the sun, moon and stars all sleep with-in
your palms, when they caress me,
little devils whisper of sin.
Force me to want to touch you
in that intimate little part.
If only you would bear it to me,
I would rock your little heart.
In a list
A contest entry
- BIG POINTS FOR LOVE, PASSION AND SEDUCTION! by freebutsafe.
1800 points, ended November 17, 2007, 12 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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Great rhythym, and I loved the ending! You temptress, you! Thank-you for entering this contest and good luck!
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good job
sounds like "things to come"
by its ending
a waiting for fullfilment
a chase hoping to be captured -
Nicely writen....i think i want to seduce you now but doubt i could to this effect lol j/k lol but very good write .....i have read one for a while and this is brilliant....just brilliant.....good luck
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