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A Worldaway

She stared into
his eyes
deep of blue

she didn't find what she was looking
for

but then again,
she did find you.

You as you are
forgetting and loud
you as you are
standing out in a crowd

life seemed to flip
before it could flop
and inside and out

as the world turned over
we tried to hang on
never forgetting
trying to stay strong

but in those few weeks
of anger and tears
it seemed of fate to seperate
to stop these fears

from reaching out

as they do so often.

But in the end
it seemed that we had met
in a world divided
so don't you fret.

Fate makes sure
the just are repaid

and those sniviling cowards
who tore us apart
believe me when I say
there will come a day...

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