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rainy monday

with this moment
I'm falling forward
nothing to catch me
only the hands reaching out
my thoughts wrap around me
their arms grasping
holding me with an unusual
force
the images
keep me safe
from the world around me
and on a day like today
all I feel
is the want for something more
love me
love me now
screaming from every pore
hold me close
look into my eyes
we can get lost there
I'm waiting to show you
every heartfelt emotion
shaking behind their bars
every impulse I've ever held back
today
together
lets let them loose
tie them with yellow ribbons
and we'll wave good bye
"i hope they get home safe"
i hope we make it home
safe
we know
this is home
you and me together
wherever we may be
will always and forever
be at home
hold me close
just hold me
close
its all I want
on a day like today

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  • Mystieknightngail
    December 21, 2008

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    YAY!!!

    Wow girl, youve got some moving images in there,

    "look into my eyes,we can get lost there"

    I see a girl just so in love and ready for anything and everything that love will throw at her, no matter big or small.

    Thank you, it was beautiful.