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dead poets define life



found myself
between Bukowski’s
observations and
Kerouac’s journeys:


puzzled to madness,
writing for sanity.



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fourth try; 14 words contest

A contest entry

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  • DrunkenRam
    November 22, 2007
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    Guilty

    LOL hits the mark.


  • Hell In Harmony
    November 18, 2007
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    puzzled to madness,
    writing for sanity.


    <33


  • ellipsist
    November 14, 2007
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    very well written indeed!


  • Phineas Red
    November 12, 2007
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    Love it.

    Love it.

    to pieces.


  • landmark
    November 12, 2007
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    this is awesome. simple, but amazing! good luck in the contest!

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    November 12, 2007
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    excellent.


  • lee-sharp
    November 12, 2007
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    ok. fantastic.

  • vertigo beat
    November 12, 2007

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    Your title reminded me that I still need to read the dead poet's society novel. I like the last two lines a lot. Me likie

    Haha, I LOVE your author's notes.

    • vertigo beat
      November 12, 2007
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      omgggggggggggggg


      we're twins!


      • DrunktankLullaby
        November 12, 2007
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        yaaaay!!
        except....... i've got like five more waiting.
        when this is all over, i really am going to make a collection of rejected 14 word pieces. haha!!

        • vertigo beat
          November 12, 2007
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          HAHA, FIVE MORE?!?!? You're crazy, woman!

          Seriously, this contest needs a tribute and yours will do just fine

          Please do post them even if you don't need to lash them out at him.

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