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Your First Tear.



I can feel your little fingers,
And your precious toes
As they poke and prod inside of me,
I watch my tummy grow.
Every time you move around,
My heart longs for you more
I can't wait to hold you in my arms,
There for me to adore.
Can you hear your daddy's voice?
He sings to you each night
Places his lips upon my bump,
And leaves kisses of delight.
You're getting bigger,
Your birthday's nearly here
I yearn for the moment I hold you tight,
And wipe away your first tear...

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I can't wait to meet my son.

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  • -amykins-
    December 21, 2007

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    Wow this is beautiful, and I'm so veryeveryvery jealous, I really want a baby. But, I know I'm selfish and want to do my degree first. I envy you, and think you're wonderful for making such a big commitment so young and being so happy about it! xxx


  • JezIsaRos
    December 2, 2007

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    It's easy to see that, and oh-so-sweet! Now I can feel that excitement and joy and really want a baby of my own! I wish you the best of luck, congratulations, etc.

  • Broken barbie
    November 27, 2007
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    COngratulations and great write. THis is SOOOOOOOOOOOO cute.;')


  • xdefyxgravityx
    November 17, 2007
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    this is absolutely beautiful <3


  • SweetJane
    November 13, 2007
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    This is gorgeous.


  • rhondasail
    November 12, 2007

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    This brought tears of remembrance and happiness for me...stellar writing and your joy is obvious through the words. Blessed be your new life together, now and always. Thanks for this gem today. Peace, Rhonda

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  • jess09stevenson
    November 12, 2007
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    great

    i love this, good write


  • Gods-Artgal
    November 12, 2007
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    This is a great poem. Congradulations with your baby. Hope he or she will be strong and healthy. My mom has a friend that is more than likely having her baby today since my mom had to rush to work. My mom and her friend are very nice people. They stick together at all times.

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