It a heady sensation
left over from a night of bloodlust;
tempted by the sour cream stretched over cartilidge.
when fingers snapped a lifeline
closed off by rough handling.
Then burnt the lot
-in her own kitchen stove.
A contest entry
- Semi Quickie by Exodus.
599 points, ended November 13, 2007, 6 entries
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Comments
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This is beautiful, all of your work is. I'm not sure which prompt you chose though, because both work well with it.
Thank you
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haha it was asphixia, thought I'd put it in notes... lol.
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LOve the entry... Very unique
Best of luck to you in the contest
Delila
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I like this~ tastes similar to the prompt but has beautiful imagery sliced with metaphors. It's as all poets should pen.
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