A Broken heart,
many a verse inspires.
A lost love
a caring shoulder desires.
A calm figure
bears inside many raging fires.
A Poetic treasure,
the Queen admires.
A loving touch is
an every human need,
A partner in love
another common greed.
An affection flourishes,
sweet talk its little seed.
A want to be happy,
senseless, crazy emotions its feed.
A reason to leave
the wrong and be right,
A feeling of pure disgust
at one's own plight,
The Battle must continue,
giving up won't do, nor flight.
The will to win,
To keep up the fight,
to never give up
is the Queen's greatest might.
Please tell me what you think
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Veru good write here
Deep heartfelt meaning throughout and yes we shall never give up the fight ever -
I can relate to this one for sure. Lost love and the struggle to find a meaningful relationship are two things I have experienced up close and personal this past year. Good luck in all your future endeavors.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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Very good write here
Penned very well and with depth kepp up the good work -
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Depth?... I think ur work is more wonderful and deep...anyways.. thanx!!!
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Beautiful poem. I loved it.
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Very good work here
Yes today people give up way too easy and in doing so will never know what they left behind
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nice write... I'm not much in the mood for a long comment but this was a nice read.
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Outstanding
Very good write
Keep it up
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