Tears
Roll down.
One by one.
Slow.
Painful.
Not a sound.
Hate.
Fear.
Loathing consumes.
Fighting.
Crying.
I'm losing this battle.
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again...im lost...i don't know....i just wrote...and this is what comes out....
Just say it.....whatever it is on your mind
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Im not quite sure what to say to this one my love. I like the poem thats not even a question its just a matter of man mentality. Of course i want to say that I will find you baby, but I know that the only one who can find you is you. Until then I await loving you and helping decipher the clues.
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Brandon
You always seem to know waht to say at just the right times. I love you and I'm sorry i've been the way I have been lately. Maybe i'll figure this thing out yet...I don't know...stay safe for me and no more getting into trouble out there ok?
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Short and sweet. I feel ya honey.
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foryourowngood
Thanks babe...**smiles warmly** I don't know whats running through my system right now...lol
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Simple, but beautiful. I feel your pain sweetie... I love you.
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irishxrose
thanks hun
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Simple - smooth - soulful - sad....
wickyd background - earthed... your lookin deep; that'll produce the best poems.. Hi Fives
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Satanic-faery
All thanks to you hun...you told me to let it out and I did....for the most part...**chuckles** Thanks babe!!!
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Wow, this is such a short but sad piece
you have written here. It's a terrible
feeling to find yourself in this situation.
I hope that it all works out for you! Take
care and thanks a lot for sharing this here!
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Jeremy
Thank you for your comments...and it is a hard place to be...maybe one day i'll find my way out...**smiles softly**
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