When I face North, and you face South
I like to do things with my mouth
If I am East and you are West
I find our coupling is the best
When you are down and I am up
We both have got the chance to sup
Sixty nine!
With mouth upon your private parts
While you rehearse your oral arts
Lips and other parts to lick
My cock you swallow double quick
Hands caress your lovely bum
Trying for a mutual cum
Sixty nine!
Nothing else will do as well
It is your favourite I can tell
You like to feel my lips on lips
While in your mouth my penis slips
I'd be there now if I just could
To kiss your clit while you kiss wood
Sixty nine!
Author notes
cricketjeff who passed the tender age of 16 a depressingly long time ago.
A contest entry
- 69th Contest by Tarja.
450 points, ended November 13, 2007, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 69 by Ravenblood.
300 points, ended November 18, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please comment below. Spelling or rhyming or scanning corrections welcome.
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Congratulations on the gold
I see that you're a winner
Judging by the verses
Maybe a little sinner
I quite agree with what you say
For sex it should be fun
Especially when there's two
Double pleasures have begun
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damn!! ur f*n talented!!!
What a great write!!
The erotica is amazing along with the great beat and rhythm and rhyme!
Im lovin ur writes!
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I am very flattered that you think so. And please do continue to read my poems but I am not so sure about the talented, I can however rhyme with the best
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oh but are talented! id love to steal ur talent for a day!
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this is great and I like it a lot
you are great and I see why you won gold
Riftkin -
Thank you for this very detailed and sexy entry! You stayed on task and were able to be creative!
Thanks again for entering and good luck!
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WOW!!
Very hot! Nicely placed to may I add! I never would have thought to wrote about those numbers.69...lol.I enjoyed it very well!!
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Jeff...
...I see you're still up to your old tricks. Really enjoyed this... erotic and funny and rhyming... your three strongest traits all wrapped into one. Good luck! -
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dats wus up! -
LOL! This was so funny with a great rhyme
scheme. Thanks a lot for sharing this one
and good luck to you with it in the contest!
Jeremy0826 -
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I like my sex funny as well as fun, so I'm glad it struck you that way.
Thanks!
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