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Empty I am

Empty me
Empty I am
All gone before it was ever there
Empty inside
Lost it all when there was nothing to gain
Nowhere left to hide
All you can see, I'm feeling so empty
Cut by the knife that is reality
Not even the emptiness bleeds out
What do I say, what do I do?
Empty me
Empty I am
So empty, wish I could say
I was finally exposed
The emptiness inside
Exposes me for exactly what I am

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  • theredcatjazzoflove
    November 12, 2007

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    i love this it explained in the story how empty you felt are the story felt when penning this i think you did a very great excellent job


    julia