Charming early morning glow:
You're hugged and kissed;
The bone tingle dissipates;
You brim with joy -
Your beam is broader than the sun's.
The warmth intensifies
And so too your excitement.
Sprawling on a lounger
You shamelessly make love to the sun -
What beautiful tan you've got!
Then the sun strikes
With a metallic glare:
You're blinded, just can't see
The lances scalding your hide -
These aren't love bites but sunburn!
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is such a great poem. I loved the imagery you have used here. It is so powerful. Well done, this is great.

