Meet me in our dreams
where in fields of green we'll play
making paper airplanes
and flying them all day
We'll make a little sailboat
and float it down a stream
You and me little buddy
together in our dreams
Meet me in our dreams
where no worries come to bother
we can play all day
just you and your Father
No worries of school and work
just you and I
having fun all day
making shapes of clouds in the sky
Meet me in our dreams
Where fun lasts forever
because my precious boy
age 4 won't last forever
Author notes
I got inspired to write this after I heard my Husband tell our 4 year old to meet him in his dreams so they could dream together, as he kissed him goodnight.
What do you think?
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so sweet. it made me cry!
BRILLIANT!!!
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This is a excellent poem reflecting on what your husband had said to your young son. Love the title "Meet me in Our Dreams".
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Precious Piece,
I just adore the fact that there are souls out there who cherish their young children like this.. and what better inspiration than a father/ son relationship, inside their dreams and out. Wonderful, and very loving. Bravo, and thanks for sharing!
Peace, Timothy
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this is cute i like it wonderful
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Thank you for your kind comment!
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Love this one
So wonderful this write is I will read the rest of the poems you are focused on and get back to you
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wonderful writing
I was just looking over the contest list and saw your new contest and so I decided to peruse your works. I cannot believe you would think your poetry lacks in any way shape or form. this poem here is nothing less than wonderful, heartfelt, well spoken, tightly spaced with the right words in their best place. Now I do not plan on entering your contest but if you don't mind I would like to place you in my fav list cause I like your poetry.
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Thank you for your kind comment! I really appreciate it when someone enjoys reading my writing as it is what I feel I do best! Again, thank you for your comment
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Ahh this is such a wonderful poem dear very sweet and heartfelt it flows well and the rhymi ng is great.Excellent poem.
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aww...this is beautiful, brillant, tender and all around wonderful!
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This is a very beautiful poem, and you did an amazingly brilliant job in creating this. The emotions and thoughts entwined into this poem are absolutely astounding and beautiful and sweet. God bless you Sis in all that you do and write. Keep up the excellent work. This was marvelous.
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Touching poem
BEAUTIFUL.....
what an amazing deep meaningful poem great flow throughout very moving spiritual write,
your author notes really place the deep love in the poem even more just so moving and BEAUTIFUL -
awwwwwwwwww the notes made it all fit and has me in tears... great job with this my friend
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awwww fields how I remember them as my brother and i used to play among the tall grass. so much fun, innocent. thank you so much for the memories.
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aww so very sweet
It brought a smile to my face. Good job.
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This is such an awesome write and very heartfelt.
It's great to read what a loving father you have for your children. It's thoughts like this that you will remember for the rest of your life. Both you and your child. To hear something like that really touches the heart and soul. I really enjoyed reading this one and I think you did a wonderful job putting it into words. Thanks a lot for sharing this one my friend and all the best to you and your family! Take care!
Jeremy0826
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Wow , Randy said that? Lol, just playing. What a sweet thing for a daddy to tell his little boy. I love how it inspired you to write this.
Will you meet me in my dreams?
Love you
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I wish I could and we were little girls again....
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